Monday, March 8, 2010
The Host
today i read that Melanie and the wanderer found uncle Jebs hide out in the wilderness. when uncle Jeb found her, he gave her water. when she got to there hide out she found herself face to face with the possible last 8 people on earth. when Melanie and the wanderer say Jared Melanie forced her body( even though she is just a thought in her head.) up and they staggered toward Jared. when they got close to Jared, he raised his hand and smacked her across the face. they went flying back. when she woke she was in a small space. she didn't know anyone was guarding her till she heard kyle and Ian come down the hall. then she heard Jared's voice. when kyle tarted attacking Jared, Melanie jumped out of the little hole in her cell and went in between kyle and Jared. kyle pushed her out of the way and she stumbled a few feet back. kyle told Ian to finish the thing. Ian switched his grip from her arms to her neck. they couldn't breath. that's when Jared came running at her with his fist ready. Melanie and the wanderer braced them self for the blow. but they heard it pass her head Punch Ian. i can visualize the fight part with kyle, Ian, Melanie, and the wanderer.
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i can see when melanie and the wanderer jump in between them. when jared fist hits ians face
ReplyDeletethat's a little bit better detail...are there any colors that stand out in your head to help you remember, or any sounds (like screaming, a punch to the face, etc)....show me so I can be right there with you!!
ReplyDeletebout time you got more post :) now i ave somthing to comment haha :P,anyways good job
ReplyDeletegreat post!! :) hehe
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