Thursday, March 18, 2010

Calli found Louis, Antonia, and martin. Calli ran right to Antonia, she surprised everyone when she said her brothers name Ben. Louis called an ambulance. Louis asked Calli a bunch of questions. one of them was, is Petra at the bluff. all Calli could do was shake her head yes. when she did that martin took off to the bluff with Louis trying to stop him, but eventually just went with him. when they got to the top of the bluff, all martin and Louis saw was Bean over Petra with a stick. not trying to hurt Petra but trying to protect her from more hurt the she needed. martin was out ranged, he tackled Ben and Louis ran to Petra and got martin off of Ben. i could see Ben standing over Petra, martin going in for the tackle and the loud thud of Ben and martin hitting the ground.

1 comment:

  1. I like how you use the word "thud" in your visualization...it makes me able to hear the sound as well!! Good use of descriptive language...and weren't you just so happy that they finally caught the bad guy?

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